Just here!

Well...this is inspired by a song...one of my favorites...I took some words and molded it into poetry in my own style...ha ha...hope you like it! (Side note- not one of my great works though!)

Close by me you reside

The more I sense

The more you seize

You are here

Just here’!

I lose me to you,

But win you to me!

For a while we met

Someplace you came

Without a cause

Asking none we loved

Shackles seemed to cease

Close by me you reside

You are here

Just here’!

The more I sense

The more you seize

How this world could

Snatch you away from me?

You were here

Just here’

I lost me to you,

But won you to me!

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SUGATA M]

I lost me to you,
But won you to me!

Thanks to bring that emotion so lively.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I loved the last stanza... It's like a magnetic pull when reading it, you need the positive and negative charge to create it... you lose yourself but gain him in the process.. Beautiful message! :)

[BlueDreams]

Very awesome write :-)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice work. Very much enjoyed. I like the font changes too..xx

[stars are far]

This was enjoyable
And i loved the way you put the lines ..
well done :)

[Thea]

I actually enjoyed reading this piece...
I felt that the lines you put in here came from a very loving heart...
A very nice poem...
:)))

[Leon R]

Hm interesting. Inspired by a son? Which one if not a secret?
Actually I find it myself that songs could be very inspiring.
anyway on the topic: nice write, not as good as your previous things, but still very good.

[sweta'karman']

lovely is the feeling of owning love and beloved,righteous it feels when you write these lines