The Miracle Angel!

There I heard them saying,

Prayers can bring miracle,

Here I'm saying today,

Miracle does happen without a prayer,

As I feel its aroma everywhere,

Without a glimpse from nowhere,

Miracle did happen the other day,

The moment I opened my heart and let her in.

 

She brings the passion to a throbbing heart,

She brings the thrill to a derelict soul,

As I feel the restless love,

Escorting with the calm desire,

Through each passing second,

Through every elapsed moment.

 

I hear her singing in sync,

Through every word she says,

I feel her love growing inside me,

Through every breathe I take,

I sense her lessening our distance,

As I see our love starting to begin.

 

Now, I open my eyes to a vision of you,

And I pray our feelings are true,

As I know for a certain,

I'm captivated with an angel divine.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Lovely expression beautifully expressed!

[Sagar Waingankar]

This one is one of the fine writing from your end, I think! Beautifully written .... deep into the meaning :P

[J Todd Underhill]

A Lovely write indeed and certainly worth of a review more than two words long I assure you, Though you are new here I can tell that writting is a passion of yours. It shows in how this poem was crafted.

[Beranger]

You have a beautiful way of expressing your thoughts, to which I clearly adhere; things sometimes happen for no reason, we just take what we are given, and maybe also give sometimes what hasn't been asked for.

[Coyote Poetry]

We need Angels and prayers. Love is hard for many. He who give without desire of glory. Will know peace in the next life. I like the way you wrote the poem and the positive feel of the poem. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

sense her lessening our distance,
As I see our love starting to begin.
..........oh...lovely lines. I like it. good writing, with regards.

[SUGATA M]

Lovely. So touching. I would have loved to meet this woman, the divine angel. I loved these lines particularly : I feel her love growing inside me, She brings the passion to a throbbing heart, She brings the thrill to a derelict soul,

[Arielle Ann]

well ..i tried to imagine from a man's point of view...h aha :)