Why do I hate?

People say: why do you hate?

Life is so less to love,

And yet you fret!

But I hate, I despise

I scream , I fight,

 Would kill the swine

With those bare hands of mine!

All hate to live

But I live to hate

Pleasure in pain

I ask myself insane!

Do you feel too?

This happiness in hate?

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

biting and deadly venom here...beautiful concept...

[OceanTropic]

I like the darkness you portrayed in this. It sort of reminds me of kink, pleasure from pain, a sort of sadistic enjoyment of the bad.

Im surprised that I got this effect from something written in little detail, and so simply. Good piece, I enjoyed this.

Keep writing!!!

Nice and twisty .... reminds me of one of my very early writes which had a couplet like : ....
this is where we kill to live
and live to kill again

this is where we live to die
and die to live again .

Nice write :)

[Natalie]

Interesting concept. Not sure I agree, but I will concede that it sometimes can serve a purpose. Probably not the one you're thinking of.

[GrandDystopia]

I good poem with a good theme, all round good:)

[M.Babu]

Your approach is so similar to mine, that i cannot help but be amazed. This was a good poem and you should keep on writing and watch yourself grow. Good one.

[Rossen]

I kicked hate out of my life over twenty years ago, never to return..

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good try..!!!