picking up pieces

be careful

i tend to be fragile

i’ve broken before

peices are missing

don’t look for them

i need to do that on my own

and in time

please do support me

keep me on track

ill help you too

if you lost pieces of your own

when we finally found them

we’ll watch the puzzle

come together

connecting into ONE

Reviews

[Tom McRoberts]

Maybe your title lead my mind in a certain direction--which be it a deliberate choice, was a wonderful one--but your short lines actually felt to me like little pieces. The capitalisation of 'one' was also a lovely touch.

[Angel Alli]

Thanks :D I've always been fascinated with how structure and phrasing adds to writing.

[Passengerr]

beautiful writeup, love the outpour of your emotions:-). Funny thing i recently wrote a piece with this same poem title.