Indecision

I can feel the wavering

of my unsteady mind,

or perhaps just an inescapable bond

with indecision.

For when a decision is made

the hammer goes down

and life is set in motion.

Potential exists in what is not yet known.

Fate, not yet decided.

But sadly I cannot live this way-

with me and all my options.

Oh curse my indecision!

Author's Note

I really like the first four lines. I may go back and change the rest later if I think of something better.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Indecision cost us a lot of heartaches and headaches. Intuition can help us make a decision. Excellent...:).......................

[micky]

I like this piece but the flow might need a little something....:)

[Sanjh]

Nicely penned, I too am indcisive most of the times. Your poem is giving the glimpse of the reality that most of the people don't want to accept.
Thank you for sharing...:)