And He Doesn't See

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And He Doesn't See

I’m broken,

Shattered,

And he doesn't see.

 

In the corner

I shiver,

I shake,

And he doesn't see.

 

My heart

Is cold.

My mind

Is numb.

And he doesn't see.

 

I weep for him.

I weep for us.

My eyes are blood red

And he doesn't see.

 

I’m broken

Shattered,

And he doesn't see.

 

Author's Note

Enjoy ^^

Reviews

[Crow21]

Good use of the repetitive technique to draw your readers attention to the focal point of your poem "and he doesn't see"

[AmongSavages]

Thank you for the feedback. I'm really glad you like it :) I love your poetry