Raging Soul- Words

When someone talks passionately
And their voice quivers,
It may not be
Out of nervousness,
Or lack of confidence.
But could be out of responsibility,
Of accountability,
On what their words may hold
For the other person.

Is it elevating?
Is it too much or too less?
Words hold expression
Of emotions..
And becomes a bridge
Onto what one can bring for the other
That kindles in them,
Something.
Something, that when
Experienced
Doesn't break the other;
And if it does,
Then gently..

Words hold responsibility,
Responsibility for the other's well-being;
Because when it's all said and done,
One still has them
To recreate together
What they once experienced
As one.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear poet. Words can be magic and words can break our heart. Powerful and worthwhile poetry shared.
Coyote

[Shweta]

Oh yes, especially when it comes to us, who deals with words often and know exactly what it means; it can ruin or build relationships.

Means so much to have you here and appreciate your words about this piece.

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

[willweb]

A beautifully expressed poetic message that really brings the reader to terms with what revolves around him or her. Wonderfully written

[Shweta]

Glad it meant something to you. Appreciate your review! :))

[Jaffer]

My goodness. How considering and thinking these lines.truly truly enlightens. Very very good.

[Shweta]

Thank you Jaffer for your kind words. Glad it meant something to you!

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful message. An enlightening poem. Enjoyed!

[Shweta]

Many thanks, appreciate your review! Glad it meant something to you..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome 😊

[Ken e Bujold]

this is an extremely powerful, very moving poem. Not just for its subject matter, which is deep and thoughtfully articulated. But that is only part of the myriad of ingredients that are necessary to give birth to a masterful work. Style, sound and rhythm bound together, precision of language, words chosen for specific purpose, woven into tapestry at the precise place they should be. All this is what sets any particular poem apart from all the others. You have done all this with this lovely work Shwetz. First of what i hope to be many more enjoyable reads of your work

Ken e

[Shweta]

Appreciate your kind review Ken e Bujold.. :) you are generous with your words..

[Perdition]

The passion of love..true love cares in a way deep enough to keep the heart aimed at what is otherwise felt and shared beyond the easy...it cares and stands atop the hill waiting for the other to reach its time and pinnacle. But to reach it together and separate, patiently, caringly, as lovingly as the Sun, The Moon, and Earth combined to breed in beauty through ways that words will never sow...You are quite the talent, still as always Wonderful to read your work again Shwetz~

[Shweta]

As always it's such a pleasure to have you drop by Perdition.. when you write, i get to read my poetry in a different fashion, well-put. Appreciate your encouraging words..