Hope

Have you ever felt so disgraced that you yourself become the source of your pain?

There is nothing left, you wanna be a shadow; forgotten and lost in vain

Hoping to be conquered by despise and misery 

Forgetting your worth and dignity in a tied cumbersome chain

Waiting for the devil to pull the trigger

Lost in the shrieks of the gloomy rain

For you have become the undisputed rivalry among the two Suns

When the paths you once chose become chaotic runs

And the reasons you had are lost to ashes

You close your eyes and they only bleed

Alone tree waiting for the storm to be

Night becomes your armor and everything you see; 

is a beautiful lie in the lead

When you opt the cave to limitless pain 

No one to stop you but to see you sprain!

Plunging in as the rays fade

Not knowing where to go 

The silent river cries

Darkness adhere to your soul 

Only a little shine remain in the eyes

Where should you go? No one can give you aid

Now you fall in to the abyss that you thought is eternal

But wait 

Why aren't you drowning

Isn't your soul completely broken now?

Sun is still not vanishing. How?

I see some light

I see a soul

An Angel and a beautiful glow 

I see the curved lips and the mercy grips

It is the hope

It is the hope

No you'r not alone

Paths aren't wrong 

Come out of the misery and rise

Become the sunshine, Be the moon to this night

Conquer the darkness with passion and fly

I'm here till the last breath 

And will always be there to help

Neither worry nor you cry.

Let those tears aside and smile

I'll be the saint to your despondent life

I can glow for you in every sight   

Clouds are temporary they will fade 

But the sky is forever for you to embrace 

I can pave a path for you to shine 

I can see the pain in your veins

Now see my friend, this is not the end

There is a lot to live 

Just hold my hand!

I can lead you to the world you lived

And you always did believe

God has made every one of us 

To love the blessing he has on us

Darkness is there for you to realize 

His mercy even in the silent night

I'm your friend and I'm your guide 

I'm your path 

I'm your light

That's what she said as I see her eyes 

Paths became clear and cloudy curtain glide

Hope started breathing  

I felt the warmth of her eyes. 

Everything came back to normal and the devil ignite

Colors started shining, the spirits smiled

"There is a lot to live. Do not give up on life!"

Reviews

[Usman Muhammad]

Well done yaar...Keep it up.
Amazing writing
Nothing to say except you conveyed your message so beautifully.
There are many stanzas i would like to point as my favorites but i have to choose one;
Clouds are temporary they will fade
But the sky is forever for you to embrace
In this poem you have covered a lot of philosophy with just hope as your main topic.
Keep writing and i will be looking forward to read your other writings.

[Ammar Ali]

thanks you :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hope.. A thing which is so needed in the current times.. You portray that feeling well.. Nice reading it :)

[Ammar Ali]

Thank you! for your generous comment :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome :)

[Crimson Apples]

I like your writing =)
Somehow, you've managed to input so many emotions to this piece. It's really impressive, and enjoyable to read.

[Ammar Ali]

Thank you ^_^

[XX]

This is awesome. It's a nice poem, gloomy though but overall it's awesome.
Inspirational poem for those who tend to give up. .. #kudos

[Ammar Ali]

Thank you so much ^_^

[XX]

You're welcome. :)

[several thousand]

Ammar Ali, you are an incredible poet. Thanks for posting something with a positive message. Stay inspired!

[Ammar Ali]

Thank you for your encouraging remarks :)

[Anneli Jo]

There is a lot to live for in this life, and I agree, we shouldn't give up! I know that despite all of the hardships, life is fantastic, and to endure everything hard is going to be so rewarding. Hope is honestly such a beautiful thing, and it always makes me smile whenever I think about the concept. It doesn't mean that we have to pretend that life is good, rather it means that we can imagine a world that one day will be good. Wonderful job, it just really got me thinking about hope, and how great it is!

[Ammar Ali]

Yes I wanted to convey to this message that life isn't so bad You just have to look a little more deeper :)
And Thank you Anneli

[Anneli Jo]

You're welcome!

[hdc]

Very inspired piece, well written with a great message. Nicely done.:)

[Ammar Ali]

Thank you :)

[Lox]

At first I thought the title was too broad but when I read the contents wow! An exquisite match! Nicely done poem, kinda makes me wanna do something productive. This poem kind of lifts my spirits up, thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece with us. I expect more.

[Ammar Ali]

Thank you for your encouragement. :)