Voices

Never lose yourself to the dark side of your mind

Torn into pieces
A voice cried with a filthy pride
To reignite the demon of damned site
Shrieks ran high but the fear was slight

Land dried as the poison glide
Blood roared and the spirits cried
"There is no hope,there is no life''
 Broken heart got off the strike

There was no indulgence but only fright
Voices arouse as the tears hide
"Angels have fallen, give up the fight"
"No", he replied with the passion untied

Soul was screaming when the voice cried
"Time has come to burn the guide"

With the fragrance of life a saint alight
Voices faded and the soul reunite
Emotions aside,eyes glittered with light
For the smile was bright,
He embraced this propitious flight

Reviews

[Crimson Apples]

Merci! I loved this one. It was absolutely mind blowing, really representing both the conflict inside yourself, and that can be found in the world today. Awesome job!

[Ammar Ali]

Thank you ^_^

[Crimson Apples]

Your welcome! I hope I took it correctly...

[Lox]

I just gotta review again, the other review was getting kinda long, I wanna let you know that when I was reading this, I kinda felt like Eminem and I was smiling like an idiot when I was feeling a rapping mood haha like wow, are you into rapping?

[Ammar Ali]

I like rapping and yes I love Eminem :-D
I haven't consider writing songs. you just gave me the idea ^_^
to be honest I just started writing it's been only 3 weeks since I wrote my first poem and a short story
And Thank you :)