One last one

One last one

A Poem by Jstmds

One human in a row of mannequins
One flying in a flock with broken wings

one anthem to purity
withstanding the scrutiny

the first draught from the well
the one book in my cell

one clearance to be
no appearance to keep

no pressure no fight
no anger no fright

simple yet moving
into the blooming

rinsing and soothing
warm and still cooling

embracing my patience
set but still rooting

modestly salient
the last one that's not looting.

© 2018 Jstmds


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I loved it... So amazing! The rhyming scheme is on point and the emotions are just beautiful! I loved the starting lines

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jstmds

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much! Much appriciated
Anjali

6 Years Ago

you're welcome!
I have to say I got a sense of the LOTR saying 'One ring...etc, etc' from this Justin.
Upon banishing that from my mind I then felt the speaker might well have been one of the original 'flower-power' generation - one of the 'gentle people' as mentioned in the song "Are you going to San Francisco'.
It imparts those feels of calm.
Nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jstmds

7 Years Ago

Thanks!
I actually wrote this referring to one person who really fits these 'gentle people' y.. read more

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