Dice in your hand

Dice in your hand

A Poem by Jstmds
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about fate

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Everyday you roll the dice,
might just find the brightest light
might just find the hardest fight
but fate is just a calming lie
so then you really want to know
what your dice could never show
you give the dice in someone's hand
who might not even spare a glance
wherever it may fall and land
so you will never have to face
the decisions of your fate
choosing a scapegoat for yourself
call him fate or someone else
as long as you don't have to stand
the thought that nothings in your hand.

© 2016 Jstmds


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i like it. using the dice as decisions was really good. i have heard things similar to this, but you took a different spin on it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jstmds

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment! Appriciate it
This is class!
So many tropes and cliches have been invented by mankind to explain or excuse what in most cases in just bad decisions and life-choice.

Yes, I do like this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jstmds

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much!

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