Limbo

 

When I try to do good, I always burn,

I guess some lessons, I’ll never learn,

Is my mind playing tricks on me, or am I too late?

When did all the love turn into hate?

 

I’ve danced with the devil I’ve kissed angels too,

I’ve drunk from the moonlit stream in the forest of truth,

I hugged the sun, where the oceans were blue.

But now I’m fighting demons in a darkness that’s new,

They say I’ve missed my ride; I refuse to think that this is true.

 

Lost in between thoughts and dreams,

I know what I saw, but I don’t know what it means,

Where sanity dies and madness is not yet born,

Where no one wants to take and no one wants to control.

 

My eyes were closed, though I think I was awake,

I was floating in the skies, or was it a lake?

There was a dance of light and birds with silver wings,

A slight breeze in the air,

And fish in all shades of pink.

 

Lost in between thoughts and dreams,

I know what I saw, but I don’t know what it means,

My conscience was clear, but my soul was sad,

It seemed all good, but I felt real bad.

 

When I feel like this, I want to leave the race,

I guess some souls will never rest.

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

a very powerful piece .. the imagery in this was very stunning... overall very nicely done... fav lines..I've danced with the devil I've kissed angels too,I've drunk from the moonlit stream in the forest of truth,I hugged the sun, where the oceans were blue.But now I'm fighting demons in a darkness that's new,They say I've missed my ride; I refuse to think that this is true.

[deeps]

I've danced with the devil I've kissed angels too,
I've drunk from the moonlit stream in the forest of truth,

AWESOME Words here!
This is a write, least I think it is
Love this, one amazing write.

[bluessadmood]

God this is what I was waiting for ,the shock I receive here,the so much beauty that I cant take
The so much dreaminess that over whelms me,for I could feel this and I want to leave the race
Some souls will never get rest..for when I do good I always burn,got used to it,lessons I will never learn
I anced with the devil and kissed some angels too..I drank from moonlight in a forest of truth..for I dream
Hugged the sun where oceans were so blue,now I am fighing darkness that tell me I missed my way
But I refuse to think it true,lost in dreams and thoughts,I know what I saw ,I know what it means
sanity here dies and my madness yey to be born..think I was awake but I float in skies or is it a lake
Oh such sweetness .what lovely images..I swear I am lost for words to talk about the magic here
the dreams ,the loss between truth and madness..this was so great
how I loved this
lovely write..