You V Time

Life is like jazz, you’ve got to get it to enjoy it

Love is like pain, you’ve got to learn to endure it

You are just like me, too proud to say you’re wrong

But with time I’ve learnt to enjoy the jazz and endure the pain and know when I was wrong.

Time is a worthy adversary, that challenges your soul,

It questions all your being, all your thoughts and all your goals,

But if your life is pure and your love is real and your sun is warm and your moon is bright and your clouds are wet and your cheeks are dry and your conscience, is clear,

Then time has nothing on you,

And you are the victor for real

 

Author's Note

As this is my first post on here please let me know what you think

Reviews

[Kristin Brecoe]

oh i like it.

It questions all your being, all your thoughts and all your goals,
for some reason thats my favorite part. this is a good piece. i like how you are ok with admitting you are wrong. that's always a good quality in a person.

and the title is a good one. i scan through the titles of my submission and generally go for the ones with appealing titles. =] nice choice.

[Nish Nish the Fish]

This is fantastic! much like what i was looking for in my contest, this is a very lovely poem. thanks for entering :)

[Emily B]

a very worthy effort, great job

[O!]

Its so often said - time will change things............but i really do believe its WHAT you DO in that Time is what changes things!

I love the Positive! ;-)

x,
O!

[Butterflymom]

"Time is a worthy adversary, that challenges your soul "..........I love this line, and it's truth! Nice work!

[Chloe Christine]

your so amazing./ By far one of the greatest poems in my contest. Thanks for submittiing btw :)
But back too the poem. It's exactly like me. Exactly true. and Truly-My favorite poem.. :) Very Very Very nice job.

[54321]

This is fantastic. I really love the optimistic tone. You have the ability to take the simple and describe it like a spring morning!

[Julio Angel Ortiz]

An enjoyable poem. In line 5, "sole" should be "soul" (I'm guessing ;-).

[Doctor Deathstab]

Aside from one grammatical error, I enjoyed it. Mellow. I look forward to seeing more work.

[Dianah]

I really like the sentiments behind this. The flow has a jazzy feel. I like the way it changes.