My Strip

My Strip

A Poem by #3

Never Catch Me Slipping I'm Always Strapped
Big Pimpin Your Girlfriend Straight Tricking
Can't Come Through Cause You Be Snitching

Don't Really Kick It With You

Cause You Stay Bitching Stay

In The Crib Before

You Get Left

F**k With Me

You Gone

Next

Shoot First

Ask Questions

Last Murder Him

Leave Him in The Past

Then Put a Stack on His

Brother Nugget Next Check Me

Out I Checked Him Out Should Have Just

Talked It Out But I'm From Newark We Chalk

It Out Watch Your Mouth , Got Goons From The South

© 2012 #3


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Dont really kick it with you
Cause you stay bitching,
Caught my eye i think this pome is tuff,

Posted 12 Years Ago


Like it but then again i don't. Your Heading I Don't like it might want to change that. Unless by saying "Strip" you mean show us your all. You lost me after you said:
"You Get Left"
After that i was lost. After reading over and over and over i stared to get this poem and it was pretty nice. Shows that this person don't take no s**t from no one, get his own money, get girl, and they got a lot of friends that will back him up if he get into a fight. I like what it shows and how you show it

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 3, 2012
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