Bitter sweet Lover

Bitter sweet Lover

A Poem by Mina
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This poem is about a woman who suffers erotomania(a type of delusion in which the person believes that another person usually a stranger, higher rank person is in love with him or her)

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a lone with an unproclaimed some one,
I called him a wise charmer,
He called me a bitter sweet lover,
half tamed he clutches ,

Skeptical young man,
Never distanced always near,
I brewed his futile captive heart,
with a key so rare,

So sleek I still paint him,
While he worships my blare,
So still he stands,
Ready to succumb my stare,

© 2013 Mina


Author's Note

Mina
Open interpretation I have already added the synopsis...
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Nice work. Personally not the biggest fan of rhyming verse, but I still respect this form of poetry. Great style and amazing idea with the erotomania bit. I like this. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mina

11 Years Ago

Me neither I have never used rhyme scheme before
Its my first time :)
Btw thank you gla.. read more

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Mina
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Gravesend, kent, United Kingdom



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