Bitter sweet Lover

This poem is about a woman who suffers erotomania(a type of delusion in which the person believes that another person usually a stranger, higher rank person is in love with him or her)

a lone with an unproclaimed some one,
I called him a wise charmer,
He called me a bitter sweet lover,
half tamed he clutches ,

Skeptical young man,
Never distanced always near,
I brewed his futile captive heart,
with a key so rare,

So sleek I still paint him,
While he worships my blare,
So still he stands,
Ready to succumb my stare,

Author's Note

Open interpretation I have already added the synopsis...
Give your views on the last stanza
What do you think happened with him ?

Reviews

[zainul]

This is quite lovely.
Enjoyed reading.

[Mina]

Thank You I have been busy with school sorry for late reply :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
I am glad that you attended school properly.

[Ravyne Hawke]

hmmm.. is she a siren? since their songs can often blare.. Honestly I am stumped as to what she is and what has happened to him at the end.. turned to stone? wrapped in a cocoon? is she a black widow spider? Anyway.. good poem without knowing all those details.

[Mina]

Thank You I have been busy with school sorry for late reply :)
read description you will get to know :) x

[annabellee]

interesting poem, I loved the story you told here, especially loved the first stanza.
Great write :)

[Mina]

Thank yu x im glad you liked and reviewed :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Riding the Rainbow]

really good poem;)))
Well done;)

[Mina]

Thank yu so much
Thanks for reviewing :)

[Sarah Jean]

I love this, so beautifully writ :)

[Mina]

Oh thank you lovee :)
I'm glad you visited and liked :)

[Karen]

Aha! The narrator is the Medusa and he has turned the young man to stone!... Of course, there is no mention of the characteristics of a Medusa, but that's all I can think about. Am I close?

BTW, this is an intriguing poem with skill and wit. Love it!

[Mina]

You have a reaally interesting point of view :) well its kind of similar toy interpretation... in my view this man is killed due to the voilent and aggressive side of eromatania x now this delusional woman sits and paints his portraits so he can only look at her (the mention unproclaimed hints ut)
Or maybe thre was no lover (remember shes obessesive and delusional :)

[Mina]

*to my
Btw thank yu so much for your review and analysis :)

[Mina]

Nd your soo close Medusa :)
I really like that concept it fits so well with my delusional woman :)

[Karen]

LOL... I guess I should have read the blurb first about eromatania. But I'm glad you still find my point of view interesting... lol.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. What a nice poem on a unique condition of erotomania. Splendid...:_

[Mina]

Thank youu im glad you visited
But no one has answered my question:P
What happens with the guy in the last stanzaa?

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)................

[ayosonolowo]

Ready to succumb my stare
nice written
i really like it

[Mina]

Thank yuu im glad you likef itt :)

[Mina]

What do you think happens with him in the last stanza?

[Coyote Poetry]

"Skeptical young man,
Never distanced always near,
I brewed his futile captive heart,
with a key so rare,"
You taught me a new word and I like the story in the poem. The above lines were amazing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mina]

Thank you soo much
Your reviews mean a lot :)
Youre a great poet your self so this cming from you means a lot :)

[Pryde Foltz]

So still he stands,
Ready to succumb my stare,

I really like this line. Nice write and clever idea.

[Mina]

Thank You glad you liked it x