The young night

A love torn apart by norms and values of society.

two souls walking in the breeze,

stumbling through the skits of time,

one feel,no touch

a laila's heart ,a majnu's desire

doors,windows,yards,chimneys,

full of presence,

yet so barren life,

aimless so hopeful they walked,

with no skin,

they walked and

they walked

the young night saw the fierce pair,

wander,

wonder,

two entity,one way 

 

Author's Note

Laila and majnu is a classical tale particular known in Asia and strikes as version of shakespeare's famous play, romeo and Juliet.

Reviews

[ayosonolowo]

Splendid indeed
i really like that
nice written
bravo!!

[Mina]

Thank yuu soo much
Im so happy you liked itt :)

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. You create a visions with the strong description. I like the feel of mystery. A strong ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mina]

Thank You I'm glad you liked it Your reviews mean a lot

[annabellee]

great story, nicely penned. I enjoyed reading it a lot :)

[Mina]

glad you liked it.
Thank you..

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Shivam Murari]

That is one beautiful and graceful love story. Enjoyed reading it :)

[Mina]

Thank you
Glad you liked it :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Very nice, Mina, and very romantic.

[Mina]

Glad you visited and liked
Thank You

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful write on a classic love story in Asiatic cultures( Leila and Majnun ) , the equivalent somehow to the romace of Romeo and Juliet , written by a great pen...:)
Majnun means the one who went insane for Leila

[Mina]

Thank you so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Mina]

Btw I forgot to mention this was a real story (laila and majnu) !:

[Sami Khalil]

Thanks for the info. You are welcome...:)