Corner of the moon

This poem shows an example of what is considered Evil and Good but how do we know which side is fair ? After all, truth is subjective and deceiving.

Looking at the earth from the corner of the moon,
Life shouting at the sounds of human breath,
Trees lifting at the feel of the dim light,

I was a devil,
Now an angel,
The creature in my blood stream preyed me up,

But love lured me,

The one eyed angel shadows,
It grunts, juggles,
And hunts
Never seen me dark before ?

I was devil,
Now an angel,

Reviews

[ayosonolowo]

Imaginative and gorgeuos
i really like this peace

[Mina]

Thank yuu im soo glad you reviewed my poem :)

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[roy k austin]

I like the Poem Mina-remember to root it in earth first though-According to l bernstein? all in all a noteworthy poem. warmest wishes roy...

[Mina]

Thank You
Roy
Glad you reviewed my poem :)

[FelicityAllona]

Looking at the earth from the corner of the moon, 
Life shouting at the sounds of human breath


great poem Mina :))
short nd mysterious

[Mina]

Thank you soo much :)

[annabellee]

imaginative, mysterious and gorgeous. I loved your poem :)

[Mina]

Thank yu soo much :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

"love lured me,

The one eyed angel shadows,
It grunts, juggles,
And hunts "
A very interesting poem and a different angle or edge...Wonderful...:)

[Mina]

Thank you so much :)
Your reviews mean a lot !

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)