When I Am With You

              When I am with you, I can be so sure to feel the radiating love between us. The smiles you bring upon my face stretch as far as the ocean is wide. Your arms you wrap around me feel like a wall of security; nothing can break it. As you pull m close, I can smell the soft scent of honey.It fills me with reassurance that you're real, not just a perfect figment of my imagination.

 

              You lean in, carefully pressing your lips onto mine. A surge of exitement flows through my body.It's just me and you, no one else in the world.But then, it stops.You pull away. Staring down at me with those beautiful hazel eyes, you dip your head low. Your lips so close to my ear I can hear every breath you take.

 

Your lips part and you say, "I love you"

             

              Those words...forever imprinted on my heart. I glance up to see you lifting your head up, your eyes sparkling. I took a deep breath, meaning the words I was about to say.

 

I hold him tight,never wanting to let go and say,  "I love you too"

Reviews

[Devan]

I can relate to this so much. I know exactly what you feel and what you put into the words with your heart when you wrote this. ^^

[Falling Leaf.]

Hmmm. The fact that you change from addressing this boy as you in the entire beginning of the story and then saying him in the last line is a sore spot for me. Other than that, quite relatable.