Shoot me once, Shoot me twice..

you stand

there

a gun

points

to my chest

breathing heavily

i ran

to meet you

here

as the sun

sets

on the world

and waves

turn cold

but you faced

away from me

then

turned slowly

when

you heard me

call your name

now

a gun

points at my chest

shoot once

shoot twice

shoot me

you've already

broken my heart

and

you've already

said goodbye

the sun

stains the sky

a deep red

as it sinks lower

lower

i will not beg

kill me now

shoot once

shoot twice

the sun

finally

dissapears

under the sea

and the deep red

stained sky

is now painted

on the sand

beneath me

you've

shot me once

shot me twice

so i now say

goodbye.

Reviews

[Serenity]

it paints a sad yet beautiful picture... its very powerful...my favorite lines "the sun finally disappears under the sea and the deep red stained sky is now painted on the sand beneath me" so beautiful yet so tragiclly sad