The kingdom

Mere words aren’t strong enough to express what you mean to me

I could compare your beauty to flowers, or your voice to a melody

But these things barely scrape the surface of how special you truly are

And I feel I need something better, more potent, for my star

Shall I compare you a castle? Is that a fair fit?

Your hugs are like a castles walls, strong and sweet

They drift me into security, and sweep me off of my feet

You are as brilliant as a royal library, filled with such wonderful thoughts

Which makes any debate we have I fight I gladly fought

Whenever a frown forms on my face I shan’t let it fester

Because around the corner waiting for me is you, my jester

You sing and dance and act a fool just to grab a smile

At times you may not know I force a frown, to keep you here for a while

Ah, how could I forget to mention my prince with perfection he cannot see?

All across the land princesses are taken by his beauty

Yet he cannot see what we see as he stares into his mirror

How I long to whisper to him things that could make it clearer

Along with his beauty comes his strength, for he is my army of one

For many have come to break the castle, yet the amount remains at none

You never cease to amaze me, as you are also the royal cook

With the delicious meals you make, its no wonder that it was my heart you took

How silly of me to forget the king that you are sitting gracefully at his throne

For a queen needs her king, and only a king she condones

To my army, my prince, my jester, my walls, my king, and my library

Please know that how I feel is of a great deal, please don’t grow weary

You are the ruler of my heart , the one I will travel with through time

I just wish I knew how to ask you if you would ever be mine

Reviews

[ANM]

Lovely words we'll written.

[Eddie M deadwolf]

Man, this is so right on also, He is your everything, the one you write for, an that says it all... Your words flow easily, they are not forced, an your narration of your subject is right on, not over descriptive, but tells me everythin without over doing it, well done my friend: Eddie