Do you feel the rain?

Can you feel the rain on your skin?
Can you feel anything at all?
Did you feel something when you let go and watch me fall?
Do you see my tears, falling like the rain?
Do you see my broken heart did you feel my pain?

Reviews

[Olumegbon]

Short and full with lots of meaning. Nice one

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Well written. I think it's really good so far.
I see lots of potential in your writing.
(Please read my story The Blonde Girl. I think you would like it a lot.)
Keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battaglia