wait for me

i know its hard

but wait.

wait to see the fields of grass

turn to a naked white.

wait while i trek into

this wild fever of oblivion

wait for me

wait while I rest

im coming-just dreaming

the day will come

i swear it

im all caught up in the strands of pearl

where the night glows

and all the world embodies silence

im walking down a current to mysterious futures

just wait for me

breathe, my darling

the night is young 

our songs fill the air

snow on my tongue

im sorry beautiful

im all yellow today

but i promise blue...

on the coming days

the shade of your eyes

i love you beautiful

carry me, wherever you go

your light in the darkness

it just glows

let me be it 

let me be it

take the world with new hands

take it all

its not so small

drift on-my sweet

drift

i love you beautiful 

just wait for me

i promise im coming

i swear it

the air is crisp

the naughty leaf

your smile awakens

the sun sends her love

just carry me

the thought of this

our separate world

where I carry you

and you me

take me-my sweet

im coming

just wait for  me

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

So tenderly expressed and so sensual. Well written and a delight to read.

[Amen_Poppies]

thank you

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Like the Terminator "I'll be back."

[Be_You_Tifful]

this poem resignates in my life so much because of my celibacy. Well written and true, it can have a lot of meaning. I took it as a woman speaking to a signifigant other.

[Amen_Poppies]

im glad you can relate to it. it means a lot to me when other people can relate with what im going through and what im writing about.

[Admiral Kirk]

This is a truly beautiful poem. It is really touching and very powerful. The emotions put in definitely come out in your writing. Great job!

[Amen_Poppies]

you write great reviews. thank you very much. it has a lot of different meaning for me, i'm glad you enjoyed

[Admiral Kirk]

Thank you, and you're welcome. You write great poems.

[WhiteWillow]

A wonderful piece. Reads like the lyrics to a song. Simply beautiful.

[Amen_Poppies]

thank you. your review was very well needed. i was sort of unsure of this poem at first. thanks for taking the time to review it