Freedom to be Free

Sometimes you feel 2 b free,u just want 2 break all chains of society n fly away 2 d sky...i always want 2 do so..i know God won't ever give me wings...but it cannot stop me from dreaming about them..

Oh! Little bird, can I ask you a favor?

I will feed your everyday, can you give me something?

I will build you a little hut; can you give me my need?

All I want from you, Oh! Little soul

Are your little beautiful little wings;

I too want to take the fragrance of freedom.

Freedom to fly up high in the sky,

Freedom to cross every boundary,

Freedom to chirp everywhere under the infinite sky,

Freedom to do my own new mistakes,

Freedom to flutter above the shinning blue ocean,

Freedom which is free of every cage.

I want to see every flower in spring,

I want to fly high under the sky,

I want to be carried away by the breeze,

I want to roll in the sand and the mud,

I want to be the breeze for the leaves to shed,

I want to be free to see every changing color.

Tell me, Oh beautiful creature!

I will give you anything in trade,

All I want is the freedom to be free.

Author's Note

not extraordinary........ few poetry ornaments

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The ability to fly and feel the freedom of no walls or prisons. Been a dream of man for 2000 year and some. I like your gentle and kind poem. I believe we need to show nature care and love. She is our protector and food/water/air. A wise person speak into the wind and ask the birds for the knowledge of flight. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[RED]

I loved it! Its so beautiful and so true.Who doesn't wants to be free? The title is amazing in itself.There is typo in there somewhere, but other than that its really good.
Keep writing
~Red