survival breath ~

Survival Breath

I can't see, I can't feel

I don't know where to go

Where am I supposed to put my feet on

It's so dark in here

I'm Hopeless, feeling sadness

The sorrow is killing us..

 

No more, no more fear

We have to fight

We have to survive

We will blow the black clouds away

Let the sun shine bright on hope again

 

I can't see, I can't feel

I don't know where to go

Where am I supposed to put my feet on

It's so dark in here

I'm Hopeless, feeling sadness

The sorrow is killing us..

 

No more tears, no more pain

People said it's hard to reach

I say with hope and faith

you will, we will, we can reach

with hope, love and smile

you will find beauty
you will be happy

I can't see, I can't feel

I don't know where to go

 

no more fears

no more tears

no more pain
we'll be happy again

 

Author's Note

White-Inked pen helped me , so thank you YO YO :)

Reviews

[hamza bargog]

it is just wow

[Priyanka Natesh]

Great work!It shows courage and happiness.With hope and faith indeed we can achieve great things.Thank you :)

[quinfinn]

a hopeful and tragically blissful poem. truly worded and direct. honest and personal.
a very good write!

[White Ink]

i Love the title! it's very catchy! and i cant wait to listen to you singing it ;)
it's nice and meaningful.. Keep on writing my friend.. n_____n

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A well thought and violent prose, a memorable piece, haunting and inviting