A Hearts Betrayal

Blackened betrayal inked and etched deep..



My tender love to harvest and reap..



My joy, betrayal tortured to keep..



My hope lies ashened in a sorrowful heap..



My heart left in the dark to weep..



No bright star in My black sky..



No Spirit willing to live nor die..



Only sordid tears to drip, cry, and dry..



Heartache and pain elevated so high..



Cupid's arrows were coated in a shiny lie of divers kind..



And dipped in poison of a fatal kind..



No longer can I this bitterness and pain hide..



Nor My hatred deny..



Until I this hurt do bind..



Until I My joys do find..



Until I leave these sorrows behind..



Until I smite Beloved Cupid, blind..



With an arrow of His Own kind..

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

The ending again was amazing, how do you come up with such great endings?
I loved the whole piece.
Heartfelt and very sad write.
Heartbreak is hard, but I hope you are pulling through it.
Again your rhyming is really flawless, and amazing!
keep writing, you are talented.

[Amduscia]

Thank You very much for the sweet words of encouragement. They mean a lot. Very glad that You enjoyed the Poem. Haha.. Heartache.. Psh.. ^.^ No comment. Thanks again for the review. I'll be sure to review a few of Your works soon, too.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

HAHA!
Anytime, no problems really :)
Thanks, I look forward to it :)

[Rea Sky]

Oooh vengeance and pain. Cool combination for a poem about love. :-D *All Thumbs up* XD

[Alfred Kukitz]

Revenge on Cupid might curse you forever without love. Careful!