Introduction

Winds blow in patterns in alignment to Fates; to run against such fate, is to be at impasse. At such deadlock, the Fates accelerate the corruption of infertility. To become animate at the insignia, one must live with the wind.

Reviews

[Archia]

I like it, it's a nice start.

[rae52]

not really sure i understand what you're trying to say but it sounds good

[Anthony]

Interesting, if just a little over-complicated! I like the colour effects.

[Black]

nice,
but dont try to use hard words
when you might not fully get them.. or everyone else in here
and its nice to have a difficult word once in a while, but your overdoing it,
go for a wider audience, that they can find the (or have the chance too!!) meaning of those words in the context...
nice prolugue though
but you should make it longer, or more interesting.. doesnt leave me wanting for more, but then again, ill continue :D