I honestly like it. The writing style was sort of laid back, "relaxed" would be the proper word I believe, but at the same time, it's cold and holds a sort of scolding firmness.
Of course, that's only backed by the very last line, which, while the language was vulgar, delivered the final message quite nicely.
Overall, short, sweet, to the point, and written with a good message and nice flow.
I honestly like it. The writing style was sort of laid back, "relaxed" would be the proper word I believe, but at the same time, it's cold and holds a sort of scolding firmness.
Of course, that's only backed by the very last line, which, while the language was vulgar, delivered the final message quite nicely.
Overall, short, sweet, to the point, and written with a good message and nice flow.
In some ways I think there isa God, in some ways I dont., Canada
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I'm 14 year old from Canada.
I grew up in a small town, and sadly, I still live there.
I enjoy, writing, takeing pictures, hanging with my friends, and much more.
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