liar.

liar.

A Poem by Amber Dawn
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you told me I was your everything ,
& you loved me.
    .... Way to go, you broke me

But guess what?

I don't give a f**k anymore.

 

© 2010 Amber Dawn


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Amber Dawn
I don't really know, just came outta my mind :/

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I honestly like it. The writing style was sort of laid back, "relaxed" would be the proper word I believe, but at the same time, it's cold and holds a sort of scolding firmness.

Of course, that's only backed by the very last line, which, while the language was vulgar, delivered the final message quite nicely.

Overall, short, sweet, to the point, and written with a good message and nice flow.

Nicely done. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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it's interesting, but extremely cliched. keep trying though :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I honestly like it. The writing style was sort of laid back, "relaxed" would be the proper word I believe, but at the same time, it's cold and holds a sort of scolding firmness.

Of course, that's only backed by the very last line, which, while the language was vulgar, delivered the final message quite nicely.

Overall, short, sweet, to the point, and written with a good message and nice flow.

Nicely done. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amber Dawn
Amber Dawn

In some ways I think there isa God, in some ways I dont., Canada



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Hey (: I'm 14 year old from Canada. I grew up in a small town, and sadly, I still live there. I enjoy, writing, takeing pictures, hanging with my friends, and much more. Want to know anymore? As.. more..

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