I. Afflatus

Wednesday Poetry 11/24/2021

Picking up my pace, picking up my pen
I guess I'm here now to begin again

The gradual turn, the final twist
Perhaps I wasn't peering through the mist

How could I've known?Took you this long
This is as good as God declaring
''nothing can go wrong''

Resuscitating my poetry, rich as Ether
You write the part I thought I'd lost forever

Catching up on prayer, captured by passion
You are the crest of Love as my religion

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

"Catching up on prayer, captured by passion
You are the crest of Love as my religion" a very powerful line in this poem. I almost felt it should have been in the beginning instead of the end. A real good poem over all thank you for sharing your work with us.