Distant Glance

Beach.Dream.04-12-'14

Deep thoughts, heavy silence in my heart

Chill in my veins, catching the fondling breeze

Soul alone, reaching for the other side

Across this ocean,or farther I don't know

But certain enough,this love needs to go

Somewhere only time could tell when

Only heaven could give me the choice

I may drag myself now if the world's easy

My faith's somehow wobbly, one must stay true

At fate's judgment, my heart chooses you

Reviews

[Stephen]

Cool! I enjoyed reading this, lucky guy who got a chance walking hand in hand with you having a chance seeing your head over his shoulder at the time of walking in on shore. Lovely moments. Hope you enjoyed!

[papermush08]

Oh how I wish it was real. Anyway thanks for the review!
-N

[Coyote Poetry]

"But certain enough,this love needs to go "
Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. I like the thoughts and honest tone of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[papermush08]

Hi! I've seen you reviewed some of my poems and I deeply appreciate your time for it. People like you inspire me to write more! Thanks a lot :)
-N

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you.