Cringe By Twinge

Pain is natural, pain is normal

Grief by instance

 Reality to glance

Shame of fantasy

I now pay sympathy

Lost the song 

I've taken it wrong

I'm a piece to shatter

My shards go scatter

Breathe the suffocation

May pain stay in illusion

But the cut digs it well

Raw feeling can tell

Reviews

[Rahul]

Breathe the suffocation
May pain stay in illusion

But the cut digs it well
Raw feeling can tell

lovely write. Thanks for writin such kinda beautiful pieces. loved your work too.
it seems you got some great talent.

[papermush08]

Wow! your reviews really hooked me! I can't really believe this, I never knew that somebody out there would say something like this to my writing. Thank you so much, I am so happy! I'm quite down today but you did put a smile on my heart. :) I hope you're doing well.

[papermush08]

thank you so much for sharing your feelings and kind thoughts. :) Your reviews somehow comforted me! Lots of love from me.

[PurpleQuartz]

A write full of emotion! Great skill with the words!

[Dhaye]

Something emotional. Sounds like what I have written during my first month here in WC when I have to release my dark emotions. Keep going.