Talking to Myself

I challenge myself to write something everyday. Today I wasn't feeling inspired so I asked myself what I was feeling. The rest typed itself. Hope you enjoy!

What am I feeling? A strange question to ponder. 

Yet too often we ignore, the true nature of our soul. 

To neglect nature’s thirst and quench that of another, 

lends reasons for my spirit to be riddled through with holes. 

So, I turn my eyes backwards to catch glimpses of my mind. 

Hoping sparks of inspiration will shed light on vibes unknown. 

What am I feeling? Why’s it hard to answer? 

Maybe I don’t feel so that others may control...

Author's Note

I couldn't think of a good title for this piece. Feel free to share opinions!

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

The inward conversation, talking with yourself. We do it so often. You've catched it very well with your poem. Beautiful poetry. :) Rudi

[Amberlilies]

Thank you for reading. I really appreciate it. I'll be sure to check out your work as well!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Thank you, Amberlilies. :) Rudi

[Coyote Poetry]

A okay title. Many strong statements in the poem could of been the title. Deep thoughts can lead us to places of confusion. Sometime we land in the wrong place and need a proper escape. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Amberlilies]

Thanks for the review. I never really thought about how deep thoughts could lead you down the wrong road. That's a really great insight. Typically, when I think long and hard about something I believe that my conclusions must be right. I guess I've been naive. Thanks for the review!

[Coyote Poetry]

Learning, thinking and figuring things out. Always a good place to be and you are welcome.