Loves prayer

Loves prayer

A Poem by Amaunet
"

couldn't sleep last night

"
 

Daughter of my heart,

child of my soul,

my heart is so empty,

my soul is so cold.


I need you to be here,

to talk to right now,

my life is in shambles,

I'm loosing my way.


Everything's changing,

nothing's the same,

I feel like I'm dying,

I need you to save me.


My home is falling down,

my family disintegrating,

I can't survive this alone,

only you truly know me.


I call out to the heavens,

I scream out to the sky,

bring me my daughter,

she'll help me revive.


Oh god above me,

oh spirits around,

call to my child,

I need her.


One word,

a prayer,

a vow,

love.

.

© 2010 Amaunet


Author's Note

Amaunet
ever been unable to sleep, because your brain wouldn't shut off? this is what happens when mine can't LOL

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Mine never shut off last night either. =) So I pay the price for it now by passing out (See Also: Insomnia and Insomniac?)
Did you try to make the poem taper off at the end? If so, that was very good! I don't think I could pull it of. (:
Good job like always!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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