I Can't Find My Way

I Can't Find My Way

A Poem by Amaunet

I can't find my way, the path is too dark.  I've tried to shine some light, but my flashlight just won't work.

 

I'm not really sure, which way is right.  I'm lost and confused, without a good map.

 

How can I find my way through the dark, when I can't even see my hand or my heart?

 

I've been here before, seems like I never left.  And just when I've exhausted all hope for relief, a beacon of light shines bright.

 

Now I can seen, my mistakes and my lessons.  I know where I faltered, and now I can make it.

 

So back down the path, I'll tred with new wisdom.  My sight is restored, and God is my champion.

© 2008 Amaunet


Author's Note

Amaunet
Just a poem, not really even written in all that much time. Actually less than five minutes LOL. Might seem like crap, but eh.... Who knows someone might just like it.

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Someone does like it, as well as the rest of your writing :)
So what if it was written in little time, it's a nice piece.
Once again, this includes the Lord.
Nice job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's pretty good! I like the way you broke it up!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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