Shards of Glass

Break not thou trust like a crystal in thy hands

Be careful not and in a grip ye’ll lose just like that

Once thee was broken to come back t’wil never be

But for most thou will have it, simple shards of glass...…

 

 

-       -       -       -       -       -       -

Never break one’s trust that’s like a crystal in your hand

Be careful not to lose your grip just like that

Once it is broken it can never be back

But for most you will have it, just shards of glass…

(as translated)       

Amata Luna

Author's Note

I was thinking of making this into a long poem. But I don't want to rekindle the not-so good emotions. =D I made fragments and this one's just a part of it. I hope you'll enjoy this one. I can't clearly think though I'm inspired to write. I think that's what a sad heart does, it inspires you and impairs you the same.

As always,
AL, @5/13/2012 - 4:45 PM

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

..you say it's a fragment yet if collide with rhymes proves that you're as good as new
=]

[Eve Brown]

i like the way you wrote it :) nice.

[emman]

Nice poem!

[Jed Sabffle]

The message is nicely conveyed, :)
We should value everybody's trust.
Gaining the trust of someone is hard but regaining the trust that's once lost is much harder.
thanks for sharing. keep writing! :)))

[Thea]

The message in this poem is so powerful and extremely true!
It's hard regaining trust one you've lost and broke it.
There's so much honesty in this poem.
Great work, Amata! Such a beautiful message you have in this piece.
:)))

[daydreamer]

beautiful write Amata. it expresses everything it has to. trust is indeed like glasss. like the simile there:)

[Desmund Tiny]

this one expressed a very beautiful message... I love it.... great work!!~

[Kuhr Gred]

:) you know amata! :) THIS IS GREAT!!! so super... eeeekkk! i love the way you express your poem.. the lines really enigma! :) and can i put your piece in my library? thanks :)
- Genie

[Suditi]

Its a complete piece in its own.
A beautiful message, expressed beautifully.