NVR

Never will I listen to your mocks

Never will I be hurt by your flocks

Never will I believe all your lies

You never really loved me;

You just wanted what I have…

 

 

Amata Luna

Author's Note

Just emotions... a passing one. I hope so... Wishing and hoping it so... One thing I always remember "the closest will pain you the BEST..." whew.

Reviews

Short, emotional, beautiful. This poem makes an awesome quote! Nice write!

[Katelyn]

Intense emotions expressed through few words. Great job :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and direct words. I like them. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Josh121]

wow i like it. It really lets us, the reader, into your mind to feel the emotion.
Short, sharp and painfull. Like an enjection of emotion. Good job.

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Really! the closest ones are always the ones who hurt us the most...
Short and effective write! well done!