Random

On random feelings... random thoughts

Thank You.
Thank You.
Thank You.
A thrice of "thank You's" for a thousand pains
for in that pain, I became utterly strong.

*

Solitary is a writer's life,
Lonely is a writer's heart,
Lively is a writer's mind
But a writer's soul is looking for something,
Someone to understand
that even though life is exciting,
Maybe somehow,
just deep inside
Someone's really hurting...

*

I miss the heights of the mountain hills
When I am down, frustrated and in chills,
I'll shout my heart and break in tears
Then after that, I'll have no fears

I hope all places are like hills,
I hope all people are easy to please,
I hope my heart is kinder and big,
Maybe I'll be better, maybe I'll be best.

Reviews

[Sahar moonlight]

The second stanza of your poem is really just perfect.
I dont know if anyone can decsribe a writer better than you did.
I've loved it and i've felt it.
Wow you're incredible

[Moflo]

I love that last stanza, it really brings this whole piece home! I also love the second stanza, I kept reading it over and over!

[Lizzy]

nice flow