this poem splits my thoughts in an array of sparklers and candles ... its a ship without rudder nor mooring ... i want to reach out .. i feel discomfited .. wish i could say an answer .. but one has to press on for ones self ... your poem ignites a deep spiritual journey in my mind .. i want to say ..here is a hand to hold .. its going to come full circle .. don't despair ..
look what you have done to me :) love and peace my friend
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I'm so glad it provoked you. I wanted more for this one but nothing fit as nice as just these lines .. read moreI'm so glad it provoked you. I wanted more for this one but nothing fit as nice as just these lines so I thought what the hell leave it as is. I wanted it to be like the opening of a door to everyone's personal childhood, make them reminisce and try to reach back to that innocence and fire all kids have that society snuffs out.
9 Years Ago
so many times less is best :) and i agree ..life has plenty roughness to it that knock the spit out .. read moreso many times less is best :) and i agree ..life has plenty roughness to it that knock the spit out of anyone ... its the getting up that counts :)))
Yes, this is a long held wish of mine too. As technology makes the world a smaller place, realisation of our part in it makes it even bigger. Wise and thoughtful words, eloquently penned.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you! I am attempting to find that spirit my children have, of wonder and curiosity in the worl.. read moreThank you! I am attempting to find that spirit my children have, of wonder and curiosity in the world.. why are we forced out of daydreaming? I wish I never misplaced that ability!