Just a thought

Just a thought

A Poem by A.marie.speaks

Unknowing
Lost
In a world
Still growing
Nothing has meaning
Days have no end
Oh, how I wish
To be a child again..

© 2015 A.marie.speaks


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this poem splits my thoughts in an array of sparklers and candles ... its a ship without rudder nor mooring ... i want to reach out .. i feel discomfited .. wish i could say an answer .. but one has to press on for ones self ... your poem ignites a deep spiritual journey in my mind .. i want to say ..here is a hand to hold .. its going to come full circle .. don't despair ..
look what you have done to me :) love and peace my friend
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A.marie.speaks

8 Years Ago

I'm so glad it provoked you. I wanted more for this one but nothing fit as nice as just these lines .. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

so many times less is best :) and i agree ..life has plenty roughness to it that knock the spit out .. read more
The older we get, the more we yearn for the joy and wholesomeness of those early years--our days of grace.
A lovely, touching bit of work, A. Marie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


A.marie.speaks

8 Years Ago

Exactly! Thank you for reading it.
Yes, this is a long held wish of mine too. As technology makes the world a smaller place, realisation of our part in it makes it even bigger. Wise and thoughtful words, eloquently penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A.marie.speaks

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I am attempting to find that spirit my children have, of wonder and curiosity in the worl.. read more

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