The underdog

A Poem by A.marie.speaks

I don't live - I survive
I don't give in - I try
I sin everyday to get by
I'd do anythingto thrive
Kill anyone who I see deserves to die
And know I lived my life
Doing what I believe is right
Grasp at everything in sight
Using all my might
I'd sacrifice my life
And never fear the light
Tear through every fight
Just to see the delight on all the faces
Knowin' I finally made it

© 2015 A.marie.speaks

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Adam Adams

"I sin everyday to get by..."
This singularly single/individual line speakin' the vibrance of heart that how much pain, misery & the feel of plea it's being sunk. It does seem like...

"... i do completely understand, but how shall i control myself not to sin? The more i prevent myself not to get swung w/the oscillations of sins, the more am being confronted by the phase of darkness scaring me right after am numbed in few blinks. I don't understand what life's been or what's merely became, what all i do know, conceive & absorb that...

... the Underrated Underdog i be... hell goddamn am
living my life like a loath of s**t
& having me swung along the pleasure of sins
knowing the justification -- the juxtaposition of past; saying i finally made it:
"sacrifice the life, doin' what i believe is all alright."

Lovely. Your poetry has too much deception (perspectives) to be understood & pouring it deep down in the glass of literature, stirring it well with your words (as a sweet) & then.. gulp it whole down in a single sip. Excellent. You surely be one lady underrated under-dog or may be, under-b***h? *Kidding*