Writer's block

Stuck in a stand still with no where to go
Minds stuck in a stalemate with nothing to show
Like water in a tap just waiting to flow
I'm stuck in a stand still with no where to go

Feels like I've got so much to say but no way to explain it
Feels like a raging inside with no way to contain it
So many ideas in my head but no way to arrange them
But now I pressed the wrong button and gone and erased them

Reviews

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*sighs* The dreaded Writer's block.......

Who hasn't experienced this huh? A right royal pain in the butt it is! There is nothing worse than having a mind full of exciting ideas that one wants to express and share, yet the words play hide and seek in the shadows in the mind.
I suffered from this recently and found writing shorter, simpler sextets broke the drought.
A very lovely little poem, extremely correct in theme and lovingly rhymed.
Very Neat!

[A.marie.speaks]

Thank you for your kind review Doodley!

[Einstein Noodle]

:) perhaps this is not your most aged write ... but it is so ironic to have started with it here :) ... all know exactly what this feels like and more .. love that it is your first post .. tickles me ribs! ... and seeing you have several pages gone by ... you did not succumb to quit ;)
E.

[A.marie.speaks]

Thank you! Yes, it was definitely an early write for me lol its a terrible phase I still get sucked into but I'm happy to say I have always pulled through it.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..............

[Robert Parlange]

Been there, done that. Actually, I'm still doing it.

[A.marie.speaks]

Good luck to you, I hope you are able to break through soon!

[J3ssInJupit3r]

Haha I loved the ending it made me laugh. This is a Great poem. Kind of cheeky. It flows and has a great rhythm. Plus anyone who is a writer can relate to this because we have all suffered from writers block one time or a bother. You did a great job capturing what everyone else is thinking and how they feel when they have writers block too. Great work.

[A.marie.speaks]

Thank you!

[Taylor]

Now ain't that the truth! Writers block is like a charliehorse; erasing what you've finally written is like slamming your finger in the car door.

[A.marie.speaks]

Thank you for the positive feed back! It's a frustrating state but at least I managed to write something out of it!

[Arezzo]

How well do I know this feeling! You really express it very effectively. Excellent poem.

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~~ hell... i know the feeling... and you expressed it really well...