It's good to be near..

Forever love A hearts mourneful cry.

Oh dear it's good to near
Cause you're always here
In the night
Sky is so bright
It's in you
That my hearts been staying
Its true
I am not just saying
Is it a dream
It feels sweet like cream
You're the lotus blooming
In this glooming
Heart
Holding everything's apart
Its good to be near
Cause you're always near
But know that you're gone
My hearts stopped its beating on
Its been withered with sorrow
There's no love it can borrow
But i will wait
Like the sun waits for morning
Like moon waits for night
Maybe our love shine some day
I will fight
Cause it feels good here
When you're near.

Author's Note

Straight through my heart hurt me not my heart.

Reviews

[mou]

very nice thought.may your dream turn in reality.

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Thanks for reviewing please guide me for future writinga

[mou]

yeah sure..just keep the strong and stable feelings.writing can itself turn everything possible..

[Solar]

A sweetly expressed poem - just a few typos: 'youre - needs to be you're and 'hearst' needs to 'heart'?

The lotus blooming in the glooming - a lovely image.

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Thanks solar i will edit that

[several thousand]

Awwww, so sweet! Nice write ASK. Stay inspired!

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Thanks poet face stay alert cause there's more coming :)