Effort's

Little poem para for motivation.

stop thinking about
success or failure
just do it
not because you want to
not because you have to
do it so that your heart feels right
do it so that your mind feels right
success or failure
does not matters
is efforts what you give
is what you get
so do it
do it so that you turn the world upside down
do it so that you have to never turn around
see its time whats matters the most
be cause once you lost it its never coming back
so get hold on time
so that you never regert doing nothing on time
see whats done is done
it cant be undone
so do it so that your heart feels right
do it so that your mind feels right
AASK©

Reviews

[Scheherazade]

I like this. It's a good, positive message that really motivates you to do something great with your life.

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Thanks yes do it causd its your time

[Solar]

I like the positive message in this poem - better to be a 'doer' otherwise time will pass.

Last lines are a good reminder that what one does must be:
so do it so that your heart feels right
do it so that your mind feels right

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Thank you for the review.yes thats the message i want convey to the people so they do it.

[Solar]

You are welcome - keep writing yours and keep reading others -its all about sharing, isn't it?

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

Yes it is after all sharing is caring.

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

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