Love

Being in love is a poem but losing love is a story .

To be in love is like a beautiful  ever evolving poem , with ups and downs your souls intertwined and moving together  like a beautiful dance ,but to lose you love is like a story there is a beginning and ther is a end unfortunately, but all good storys must come to an end .

Reviews

[Kane Hagwood]

Even with the run-on and grammatical errors, it is apparent a lot was pressed into such a small amount of words. And perhaps in some ways love comes to an end, but it begs the question: what of love remains? And that is a beautiful analogy about obtaining love is like a poem, but losing it is a full story in itself. Perhaps, if you wanted, you could expand on that more, and really let the words flow. But it's okay to be be a man of few words. That just means your words hold more meaning. Thanks for sharing this :)

[Stu. T.H.]

Quite a cute way to put it, and I do not mean it is untrue nor did I mean to belittle the meaning. I just find the way the work is framed and woven by simpler terms than what I'd often use to describe heartaches, but still hold true to its initial values, and that is quite a magical thing you managed to accomplish, author AManOfLove.

[AManOfLove]

Pardon my Grammatical errors
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