Love,Family, and Intrique
A Book by Amanda J Hopwood
 Cassidy, a 24 year old college student, finds out she is part of another family. That family is under attack and her heart is at stake.  © 2014 Amanda J Hopwood
Author's Note
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There are grammar mistakes, need help with dialogue.
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Reviews
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Gonna start reading tonight!!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I might have chapter 4 posted by then. :) Just a few paragraphs of finishing it I hope, then just a .. read moreI might have chapter 4 posted by then. :) Just a few paragraphs of finishing it I hope, then just a quick run through. I will admit I might need a lot of help with that one. Had some stuff happen over the weekend so it feels a little forced but it still gives a good basis as to what will happen in coming chapters.
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Titles are so hard to decide, aren't they? I'm having trouble settling on one for two of my stories myself!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Last night I was thinking Bookstore Dreams, going to play around with that one. What did you think o.. read moreLast night I was thinking Bookstore Dreams, going to play around with that one. What did you think of the Chapter?
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10 Years Ago
Admittedly I didn't have time to read yet last night so I put the book on my reading list while comm.. read moreAdmittedly I didn't have time to read yet last night so I put the book on my reading list while commenting about the book title. Democracy's End was That of the Monarchy before that, and originality Out with the Old. Traitor Princess is finalized (I think?( but was once Through Jade Eyes, and Fallen Ones was once Corrupt Incorruptible. On that chapter now!
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10 Years Ago
A comment on summary grammar mistakes, there should be a comma after "Cassidy" and "student". Also,.. read more A comment on summary grammar mistakes, there should be a comma after "Cassidy" and "student". Also, it should be "she is part". The second sentence needs rewording or perhaps could be entirely eliminated. Many people are judgmental enough to ignore the story the instant they see that many grammar errors in a little blurb. Summaries are often the deciding factor and first impression, so they should be as close to flawless as possible. The story sounds cool though! On it!
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10 Years Ago
Ty...I will get to that as I soon as I have a few minutes. Time to start my day lol.
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10 Years Ago
Awesome, hope it is a good one!
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10 Years Ago
Does this title and summary sound better?
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Author
Amanda J HopwoodPleasant View, TN
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I am a single mother of three who is finally taking the step to write a book. My friends have supported me and are giving me the motivation I need to stick to it. I am joining this website in hopes it.. more..
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