Dark Cloud

Dark Cloud

A Poem by Amanda

My feelings for you were once to deep

but now when I see you I feel this dark cloud come over me.

I feel anger stewing inside.

I feel hurt coming by me.

I feel the past creeping to me.

I cared so much.

And all you cared about was what people thought

And what other girls you could flirt with.

You were a player.

You never took a time out,

always stayed in the game,

without shame.

You were like broken glass.

until you shattered.

You were once so sweet.

I really cared.

But now when I see you...

I feel darkness and hate.

Your like a dark cloud.

© 2011 Amanda


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Thanks. Your right.. i did spell it wrong! i was in a hurry because i was messaging you over facebook!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is good!
I care about you, so I will give you some constructive criticism.
You spelled coming incorrectly.
I would recommend staying consistent with end punctuation as well A's capitalization.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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I'm Amanda. Most of my friends call me Manda. :) I can be kinda weird sometimes when I'm with my friends. But, I have a big heart. My family's the best. Dance is my passion. Taylor Swift's my role mo.. more..

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