Unthought of

Unthought of

A Poem by Amanda

You used to bring it up

every night and day.

I used to avoid it

Because I never knew what to say.

You bring up other things

in the blink of an eye

which makes me think,

lay there, and sigh.

Is it now awkward to you?

Because now I'm blue

but it's nothing new,

just Unthought of

and never talked about news.

© 2011 Amanda


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Ki
This is excellent!
Again, nice use of end rhyme. A suggestion- since you've really mastered end rhyme, I would recommend other things, like alliteration, extended metaphor, rhythm, etc. Just to explore.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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I'm Amanda. Most of my friends call me Manda. :) I can be kinda weird sometimes when I'm with my friends. But, I have a big heart. My family's the best. Dance is my passion. Taylor Swift's my role mo.. more..

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