How it used to be

How it used to be

A Poem by Amanda

I'm thankful.

I'm grateful.

I'm more then that.

I don't mean to complain,

I know it won't help me gain,

a thing when I do.

But sometimes the pain just towers over me

like a horse does a ladybug.

I can't always control

How it makes me feel.

Even though it all happend so long ago

It's still happening.

I'm waiting for it to stop,

Like when your at the top,

of a scary rollar coaster ride.

But sometimes it still hurts

and it makes me wanna blurt

out all the anger I let build up.

I'm never going to bet,

for my face still gets wet,

with the tears that hold me together,

that it'll ever be 100% better.

I love my family.

I love my friends.

They make me happy,

but I still have my days...

When all this comes together

and reminds me of how it used to be.

I'm just glad it's slowly getting better.

© 2011 Amanda


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Excellent peom!! I love the flow of it. nicely done

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw I loved this poem. I really liked your rhyming! Good job :3

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm Amanda. Most of my friends call me Manda. :) I can be kinda weird sometimes when I'm with my friends. But, I have a big heart. My family's the best. Dance is my passion. Taylor Swift's my role mo.. more..

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