Taken by surprise

Taken by surprise

A Poem by Amanda

I was taken by surprise.

Out of all of the girls out there,

you chose me.

It's so sweet and amazing

how much you really care.

The only things you don't care about

are what other people see.

and what other people think.

and what other people will do,

when they see what you do.

Your careless about the things a person should

never have to worry about,

which is amazing,

because most people aren't that way.

The way you care about me,

is breath taking and makes my mind wander

into a field of thoughts... good ones.

It makes me feel so great to hear from you.

day by day.

You don't let anything, or anyone

get in the way of what your determinded to do.

And that's why, i've been

taken by surprise.

© 2010 Amanda


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I feel the exact same way. Why am I important to him at all?

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I'm Amanda. Most of my friends call me Manda. :) I can be kinda weird sometimes when I'm with my friends. But, I have a big heart. My family's the best. Dance is my passion. Taylor Swift's my role mo.. more..

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