What you've done to me

What you've done to me...

no, theres no excuse.

no reason.

for what you have done to me.

you've left scars...

of lies...

of blame...

of pain...

betray...

and the unsupportive atittude you can't seem to go without.

you've done a lot to me..

and the pain can not hold anymore.

i'm about to burst, very surprised i haven't.

i'm on my last straw... just barely hanging...

my tears are in every direction...

and my heart is about to have an erupion..

for i just don't know if i should run... or hide... or quit this, forever........

Reviews

[Alexis]

I feel like I can really relate to this poem... I liked the same part as Michiko. Good poem :)

[Ki]

Of course... I like the part "You've left scars of lies, of blame, of pain, betray"