A day without you...

A day without you is like a day without a breath...

a day without you is like a stab of pain...

a day without you is wanting to cry...

it's hard to stand up to the pain...

when i have a day without you...

i don't know how i can last,

the pain is just unbelivable.

i can't seem to get through without you.

it's like running into a field of loss and being nothing but alone.

i don't know how i got to feeling this way..

but during the days it just got hard for me to stand

not talking to you.

a day without you is like a day without a breath..

Reviews

[Keevan]

very good, Amanda! to me, the rythem was a little off, but all in all, a very good poem!

[Daniel Gardner]

This is good. I liked the way you repeated the first line at the end.